Read a sample essay written in response to the Common Application option #5 on a period of personal growth and new understanding.
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From a fellow horse woman..I’d have to say I agree with this article. I’ve come across a lot of women who ride horses as a hobby and talk to them like babies, buy them blankets and 50 different expensive products. I call them pony petters. But it is offensive to lump every girl with horses into this category. I own two of them. They live outside. I don’t put fly sheets on or give them any special treatment. After all these are animals that survive on their own in the wild. Aside from this, I don’t ride my horse with domination forcing it to listen to me. After all, we don’t teach the horse anything. They can all run, stop, spin, back-up, do any maneuver needed for competition long before we ever ride them. So when you are “training” them, you are really just presenting your ideas in a way in which the horse understands and is willing to do what is asked of them. Not because you forced them to. I agree a horse would probably prefer to stand out in a field and eat grass all day then work, but the same can be said for any species. And I use my horse for an actual job. I’ve worked on numerous cattle outfits and horses are very effective for going out and moving, sorting, or doctoring cattle. And a horse can cover quite a bit of rough country in little time. They are by no means stupid. Through doing these jobs and learning what is expected of them as they get more seasoned, they start to help you get stuff done. I do not put my horse over people or relationships, and I have never depended financially on anyone else in order to pay for them. So have you ever met anyone…guy or girl that uses a horse for the purpose of doing an actual job with them rather then just a hobby. We depend on our horses to get our job done. Just like a businessman needs his laptop. Because that is a whole different ball game..and to lump us all into the same category is way off.
Jill's essay, whether deliberately or not, answers these questions in ways that work in her favor. She shows that she is observant, caring, and funny. She demonstrates self-awareness as she narrates the ways in which she has grown as a person. She shows that she is generous and finds positive qualities in people who have a lot of negatives. And she reveals that she gets pleasure out of overcoming challenges and working hard to achieve her goals. In short, she comes across as the type of person who would enrich a campus community .
This version of How to Write an Essay Introduction was reviewed by Megan Morgan on December 18, 2015.
Several archaeological finds from Europe also support the interpretation of increased behavioral sophistication in H. heidelbergensis . The site of Boxgrove in England (dated to roughly 500 kya) has yielded thin, extensively flaked flint bifaces (a stone tool which is produced by removing flakes of stone from both sides) along with cut-marked bones of horses and rhinos. A large, robust hominin tibia (., shin bone), attributed by some to H. heidelbergensis has also been recovered at Boxgrove. In Germany, the site of Schöningen (dated to roughly 400 kya) has yielded three wooden spears associated with flint tools and chips. Similar sites in Spain, France and Italy also yield Late Acheulean tools associated with large herbivore bones. Together, these finds are evidence that H. heidelbergensis may have hunted and butchered large game, an activity that requires experience, practice and cooperation. Based on archaeological evidence, H . heidelbergensis had increased levels of social cooperation.
This scheme seems perfectly plausible and suggests how palomino breeders might increase their chances of producing the “ideal” golden palomino. Gower also suggests that A A A A horses may be redder than A A A a horses and a better choice for producing golden palominos.